Dear Miss
Cequena,
Within three months, I am able to write
comprehensive and informative essays with sufficient data with lesser mistakes
in the subject-verb agreement, with correct usage of punctuations, and
organizing thoughts in an essay form. Also, I learned to evaluate my peer's
work which helps me to gain knowledge and the abilities to improve my writing
skills.
I have a difficulty in the transitional
devices especially the chronological part because I tend to jump from one idea
to another without consistency and conciseness. It is very hard for me because
I lack unity in my supporting details which makes it unclear for my readers.
In order to achieve my goal, I simply
arrange the details in a logical manner and use transitional devices to connect
the idea sequence to the next one to emphasize my supporting details.
Patience, Perseverance, Practice and Passion
are the virtues I learned in ENGLCOM which I am proud of because it teaches me
lesson of "no pain, no gain". It allows me to be open-minded to
accept challenges which can help me to improve my abilities in reading and
writing.
Moreover, during the revision of my extended
definition essay, I learned to use specific word and abstract concept to
elaborate my ideas about my thesis statement. Also, I am able to point out the
similarities and differences of my topic.
Lastly, I improve my argumentative essay
making sure that I have a concrete side which can support my essay and convince
my readers. I also learned to state the difference of an opinion from facts
using books as my reference.
Yours
Truly,
Christelle
Liz Oña
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